PART TWO: Would this make a good short film?

I could just repeat what I said in response to Part 1. Basically, this is a short story, not a screenplay, there is too much internal thinking, and some believability questions need addressing. And one other thing: what is the point? What I mean is, I skimmed both parts and I still do not get what you are trying to say. Potential thief is caught by a child who is outdoors at 1:00AM, is for some reason invited inside by the mother, and they somehow go from adversaries to lovers. What? Is there a point to this?