What do you think of my short story about my pony!? Annabelle's Firefly?

i really liked.. definitely something i would read! hopefully you write a ton more and make a book so everyone can read it! very inspirational(: and good use of words, very descriptive and made me feel like i was right there with you.. i'll definitely buy it when it gets published(: you have a talent.. make the most of it!(: